editing 5th april

Our group decided to show our horror opening footage to somebody with no clue as to what it was about or what the storyline was. However, after having received the feedback for our opening it was clear to us that some changes needed to be made. It seemed our opening was not very understandable (as the feedback told us) and it was often unclear what was going on and who was who etc. As a result of this feedback, we decded to re-edit parts of our footage and change our sound which goes with the footage. We decided to change the sounds because there was no sound bridge involved and the sounds we used had little continuity as they were only short peices of different sounds 'merged' together which didn't work very well. It was more clear to us that changes needed to be made after recieving this feedback, because it was not as noticable to us as a group, because we know the storyline and plot ourselves. Now we have this feedback, we can alter our opening to make it clearer for an audience.